Mr Nosey by Shona
Mr Nosey
Mr nosey is a very nosey old man. He was always spying on people and he would break into post boxes and read peoples letters. He smelt like rats and skunks. He wore grey clothes to match the stone houses so he could nose around.
He stole things out of shops because he was so nosey and wanted to know what they were. He had white hair and his skin was brown with mud. His hair and clothes had twigs and leaves in them from creeping around. He lived in a tree house so he could spy on people from up high.
Mr nosey is a very nosey old man. He was always spying on people and he would break into post boxes and read peoples letters. He smelt like rats and skunks. He wore grey clothes to match the stone houses so he could nose around.
He stole things out of shops because he was so nosey and wanted to know what they were. He had white hair and his skin was brown with mud. His hair and clothes had twigs and leaves in them from creeping around. He lived in a tree house so he could spy on people from up high.
posted by Ruairidh and Tanya at 1:44 AM
2 Comments:
*You have described his habits and what he looks like very well.
*I think from what you say about him he sounds a very weird person
Wish-That you carry on writing a story, mabye about Mr Shy.
I think you had a good story but you could hav gave us a meaning for some of it like you said for the grey house. What grey house?
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